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Can Someone please Proofread my essay paper. I need help with transitonal words, and i don't know where to break up the second paragraph. I feel as if its too long.
 
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Preview: ... was to always be prepared for the unknown. As a child I could not comprehend this wisdom; I questioned this advice, wondering how I could possibly prepare for something when I did not know what it was. As a child, I only cared about having fun; playing was all I could think about and I rarely considered the consequences of my actions. I failed to think, which led to many problems in my young life; it seemed, as I got older, the lessons became harder. Going to high school should have been a transition point in my life. Instead, I failed to recognize the transition and continued to make mistakes. In the ninth grade of high school, I began to have new friends, many of whom could drive; going out was much ...

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